This is an impressive debut post. I'm looking forward to more from you, Vast.Active.Living.Intelligent?.
Fresh, can't wait to see more!
Great minds thinking alike...I used this same scene in a post for the Close-Up blog-a-thona few months ago. I like the addition of the colour screenshots and text.It's a terrific scene.
"I saw a man killed this morning."
"Shot... 
"In some sort of park."
"He's still there."
"Someone."
"How did it happen?"
"I don't know...
"I didn't see."
"You didn't see?"
"No."
This is an impressive debut post. I'm looking forward to more from you, Vast.Active.Living.Intelligent?.
ReplyDeleteFresh, can't wait to see more!
ReplyDeleteGreat minds thinking alike...
ReplyDeleteI used this same scene in a post for the Close-Up blog-a-thona few months ago. I like the addition of the colour screenshots and text.
It's a terrific scene.